Friday, 26 February 2016

The Soccer Player

The
boy
was
playing
soccer
alone
in
the
playground
as
he
took
a
shot                                                                
the
whole
crowd
was
cheering

By: Ryan
                                         
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3 comments:

  1. Unknown28 February 2016 at 12:37

    You really showed the life of a soccer player the transition was smooth

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  2. Elena28 February 2016 at 13:53

    I really enjoyed reading your poem. The thought that after all those years of training, a young boy ends up as a soccer star, is truly inspiring.

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  3. Unknown29 February 2016 at 16:42

    Your poem is good, it expresses how passionate you have to be to make it to the big leagues. Your transition was also smooth. Great work!

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