Friday 26 February 2016

Feathers of a bird

The
thought
of
freedom
graced
her
mind
as
she
flew
across
the
sky.



By: Keely
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous27 February 2016 at 13:50

    I love how you used the adjective "graced" in your poem, and it really helps to let it flow.

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  2. Anonymous29 February 2016 at 12:48

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  3. Anonymous29 February 2016 at 17:38

    I like how you used personification and gave human qualities to a bird. Your poem is creative.
    -Princy

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