I think that your poem is beautiful and it really like that you used the verb "blossom" to describe the flowers changing into fruit.
Your transition is very clear and I had a clear image of what your poem is about. -Princy
I think that your poem is beautiful and it really like that you used the verb "blossom" to describe the flowers changing into fruit.
ReplyDeleteYour transition is very clear and I had a clear image of what your poem is about.
ReplyDelete-Princy