Wednesday 24 February 2016

Daybreak

With
The
Dawn
Came
Birds
That
Sang
Lullabies
Of
Sweet
Dreams
As
The
Stars
Began
To
Dance

By Elizabeth
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4 comments:

  1. Unknown26 February 2016 at 13:47

    WOW, I love the way you worded your poem.♥♥♥

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  2. Unknown28 February 2016 at 09:09

    I really like the way you changed from day to night.

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  3. Anonymous29 February 2016 at 19:58

    ooooo...The transition sounds so cool, from day to night i like it very smooth. Good job!

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  4. Anonymous1 March 2016 at 04:42

    I like how you used a lot of figurative language in your poem, nicely worded, you did a very good job

    Tharsha

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