Friday 26 February 2016

Tadpoles

The
tadpole
swam
and
leaped
on
the
leaf
to
croak
wearing
green.

Image result for cartoon tadpole turning into a frog

By : Racheal

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4 comments:

  1. Elena28 February 2016 at 13:50

    I love the way you made the transition from tadpole to frog! And the "wearing green" line is poetic genius!

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  2. Unknown28 February 2016 at 18:06

    I like the transition of the tadpole to the frog wearing green very creative

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  3. Anonymous29 February 2016 at 12:53

    I like how you used the word leaped instead of jump

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  4. Anonymous1 March 2016 at 18:05

    I love how you transitioned the poem. Well done!

    Riffat

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