Friday 26 February 2016

Bacon

The
pig
ran
freely
in
the
sizzling
pan
straight
to
my
stomach.

By:Taejonna

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4 comments:

  1. Unknown28 February 2016 at 18:03

    I liked how you used bacon and put it sizzling straight to my stomach

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  2. Anonymous28 February 2016 at 18:52

    your poem is very good

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  3. Prithei29 February 2016 at 04:14

    I like your poem, I like how it went from pig to bacon in the pan to into your stomach, and I also like how you used the word 'sizzling'.

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  4. Anonymous29 February 2016 at 05:17

    I think your poem is very funny and i liked the transition you used!
    -Karina

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