Friday 19 February 2016

The Baby

The
Sounds
Of
A
New
Born
Baby
Cooing
Is
Buried
Deep
Below
The
Earth.
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By;Leonardo
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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous21 February 2016 at 11:48

    It has a very good transition but it is very dark

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  2. ChazipaG21 February 2016 at 17:41

    I think that it is good but brutal

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  3. Anonymous23 February 2016 at 14:34

    I think your poem was good and is the reality but sounds really brutal

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  4. Unknown26 February 2016 at 13:45

    I agree with Om, it is a really good poem, but really dark and sad. It's also very true

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  5. Unknown28 February 2016 at 09:12

    I like your poem its true but I agree with everyone that commented so far. Its really dark...

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  6. Ryan28 February 2016 at 09:20

    Really good transition but really dark.

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  7. Ryan28 February 2016 at 09:21

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