Friday, 26 February 2016

The leaves

The
green
leaves
on
the
cool
spring
evening
turned
red
as
they
fell
to
the
ground
on
the
crisp
autumn
morning
Image result for leaves turning red as they fall
 
By Tharsha.R

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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous27 February 2016 at 13:52

    I like that you added the adjectives "cool" and "crisp" to further describe the weather.

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  2. Robert hinds29 February 2016 at 14:33

    I liked how you described the image of the leaf also I liked how you transitioned from spring to fall

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  3. Anonymous1 March 2016 at 18:08

    I love how you described the leaves from spring to fall. All in all, it's very descriptive. Good job!
    -Riffat

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